Something to Think About:
1. To what did Charlotte compare her mother?
2. Why do you think Miss Hancock offered to discuss Charlotte's metaphor with her?
3. After writing the first metaphor about her mother, Charlotte writes several others. What do the various metaphors about her mother have in common?
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ReplyDeleteMiss Hancock sounds like she wears a lot of makeup :P
This story has both a 1st and 3rd person view but the story is mainly focused on Miss Hancock and Charlotte but the background to this story is odd, is it about them using metaphors to everyday life?
ReplyDeleteThis was a pretty good story. I liked the way it described everything. This was a story that i could picture in my head as i was reading it. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms. Whitney. This one wasnt confusing.
Zack, I think what you said is what the did. They would think of things and make up metaphors abot them. Its just that Charlotte's are alot more detailed than everybody else's.
ReplyDeletei HAVENT READ THIS STORY YET BUT I WANTED TO SAY IT DOESNT SEEM BORING!
ReplyDeleteI liked how in this story, everything was so fully explained. :P it was cool how you could totally picture what you were reading. I really liked this story, it really caught my attention. But i was a little confused on why she wasn't happy to see Ms. Hancock a second time.
ReplyDeleteumm, i dont like charlottes mom :p
ReplyDeleteshe seems really snobbyyy >:o
i liked this storyyy :)
ReplyDeletewell, more than the other ones ;p
i really liked this story more than the other ones because i think this one had more of a point to it. I liked the characters in this too. They explained them too perfectly:P i can picture them in my head, along with the rest of thr story.
ReplyDeleteThis story was ok I loved the detail the peron that wrote used more detailed then the other but not somethign i would read if it wasn't an assiment
ReplyDeletei really like this story WAY more that the other one totally!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThis story was good not the best but i could picture most of the things in my mind.
ReplyDeleteI agree with garret. This story was very discriptive and it made the story easyer for me to understand. I liked this story.
ReplyDeleteThe way Charlotte discribed her mom as an office building made her mom sound really borning:P but I thought it was cool how well the story decribe what everything was like.:)
ReplyDeleteI liked the story kind of but it didnt really get my attention very well.
ReplyDeleteSince this story was in "metaphor form" which made it VERY descriptive and WAY more interesting and easier to understand than the other ones!!! :)
ReplyDeleteThis story is EXTREMELY descriptive which makes it hard to follow D:
ReplyDeleteI liked this story quite a bit. It was very descriptive.
ReplyDeleteCharlotte's metaphors were very good...
I really liked this story because it was very descriptive and detailed! For it being like this it made it easier to understand and and i was more focused on this story more than the other ones. I think that having kind of a first and third view of the story also made it easier to understand. I really liked this one more than the others but i wouldn't like reading it for fun like Brittany said i only did read it because it was an assignment.
ReplyDeleteI liked this story alot because it was very descriptive and you could put yourself in the girls perspective. It was pretty easy to understand and that stunk that the teacher got hit by the bus..
ReplyDeleteI haven't read all of it but it seems to be that Charlotte's metaphors were way better than everyone elses. It's also VERY descriptive so far.
ReplyDeletethis story was okay..but i dont get why charlotte thought that she killed the teacher?
ReplyDeletethis is a good story but i dont get why charlotte thought she killed her teacher?
ReplyDeleteI agree with u too Isaac Charlotte's metaphors are very good...
ReplyDeletei loved this story it was so good. her metaphores were really good!i don't get why chalotte thought she killed her teacher either but besides that i really enjoyed the story.
ReplyDeletei agree with you cassidy it was very discriptive. i also couldn't believe she got hit by a bus i was shocked because it kind of came out of nowhere.
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